Gremlin wrote: 24 Apr 2018, 07:37
Cosmos666 wrote: 24 Apr 2018, 00:42
I'm loving how you are updating all of the most outdated spotlights. It is amazing how much happened during the period for these characters.
Tell me about it. We don’t have many of the “big” older spotlights left to update, but just as you get them squared away they suddenly go through major changes.
You can look forward to a few more of these older spotlights being brought up to date in the next month too.
It's amazing. Havok's biography almost doubled in size with the update.
But I have a observation. The paragraph that ended the spotlight before the update was kept in present tense while the rest of the page is in past tense:
With Annie and Carter gone, Alex has devoted himself fully to his role as leader of the X-Men. He is still getting over his awkward start with his new team and dealing with the mounting tensions between he and Iceman. He has also been showing signs of jealousy, now that Polaris has shifted her affections to Iceman. Alex’s patterns of jealousy have increased notably since the team’s encounter with the creature known as Golgotha. During the X-Men’s battle with Golgotha, Alex and Lorna became separated from the rest of the team, and Lorna had some sort of vision. She has yet to tell what exactly she saw, but Havok is determined to find out.
It makes for a awkward read.
Also, are the spotlights for Belasco, Selene and Mr. Sinister in the line for updates?